Sunday, November 16, 2008

Lets Write Better!

I am so impressed with the blogs that you all have posted. You are doing an excellent job. However, please make sure that you use correct capitalization, grammar, and spelling.

Here is your new post:

What is your biggest struggle when it comes to writing essays? Also, what could we do in class to make writing easier? Be specific!

15 comments:

Chantel said...

I think the biggest struggle is thinking of What to write. What I mean is by having to think of what we have to write and how.
We maybe could do everybody's first paragraph together on the board.

-Chantel-

C.Marie said...

I believe the hardest thing for me is to find how to say what i want to say in the right words.

Chantel said...

I agree C.Marie
Theirs a lot I want to say but don't sometimes know how

-Chantel-

lashune said...

I think the thing is that i dont know where to put my comma's, and when i get on one subject i wanna get on another, like for example if i said i wanted to write about teacher's, but then i'll jump over to fights at school and that's not what the subject is about."Help me out!"

Janay Ashley LaShawn Nelson Williams Brown Jackson Golding Bonner Robinson said...

The toughest thing for me in Language Arts is when I have to brake my paragraphs down. What I mean is that I can't just put all of my information in one paragraph I have to put it into 3 other paragraphs.

Anonymous said...

I think that when we do letter written we should do what we want. Like make our on everything form the start to the end. Write about how we feel and what should we do every thing like that . By: Breauna Thomas

Rita-Chan said...

I agree with Chantel. Its hard to think of what to write. but one you think hard enough, you'll get it, and when you do, trust me, you won't be able to stop. ^_~
~Brenda Jacks~ also known as Neiko Ruzuki

Kay-L3! said...

i would honestly have to say that most kids dont focus on writing because of our modern day technology. we have our fones and emails that make us lazy in ritting

Rita-Chan said...

Most problems with writing today is figuring what to write about. like i said, if you fing that perfect topic, you can't stop writing.
~brenda~

Chantel said...

Thanks for your comment Neiko

$~$ERIN$~$ said...

My problem is when i think of a topic i don't always have enough things to write about it, so i just change the subject and my pargraph are sometimes to short.

Anonymous said...

I think my biggest struggle in language arts is staying on one topic in an essay

Anonymous said...

I believe that the hardest point for me is stating my information in the right words

leilany said...

I think is learning all the parts of speech becouse you have to memorise all of them and what they mean.

leilany jonas

Lexxus said...

The beginning!I don't catch know when my sentence is a run-on!I know you said if you be about out of breath reading it,it's a run-on!But I don't run out of breath but yall do!